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What is executive presence?

Session s-014 ยท 19 May 2026, 09:18
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Filler-heavy opening, but the core idea is strong. The corrected version keeps your voice and cuts roughly half the words. Listen to how much faster the meaning lands when the throat-clearing is gone.

Original transcript

So, um, executive presence is basically, like, the way that you, you know, sort of carry yourself when you walk into a room โ€” it's, um, it's not just what you say, it's actually kind of the way you say it, right, and how, basically, people kind of trust you to, you know, lead the room.

Corrected

Executive presence is the way you carry yourself when you walk into a room. It's not just what you say โ€” it's the way you say it, and whether people trust you to lead the room.

This session
Filler density
11.2
per 100w
Pace stability
38
stdev WPM
Repetition
14.0
%
Pauses
4
avg 0.6s
One exercise

Re-record the same answer in 30 seconds. Time pressure is the cheapest filler-killer there is.